b32 prompt #2 — GoFundMe story: final polish of LLoL’s refined draft#
dv_ClaOp47Max, 2026m05d28_13h54. Self-contained.1. The task#
LLoL already has a highly refined GoFundMe story draft. The job is final polish to near-zero-edit quality, not a rebuild. Deliver a clean, copy-paste-ready GoFundMe page (title + story body + cover-line + goal note), in an execution llog at the next free infra number.
The canonical starting draft is recorded in the b32 llog (b32 — Launch-promotion prompt-set: execution (5 prompts + newsletter reframe), §”LLoL’s latest GoFundMe draft”). Treat it as the base.
2. Read first (inputs)#
The b32 llog (this session) — the latest draft + the give-away decision (criterion, not named recipient) + the auction-2 instruction below.
b29 — GoFundMe page executed — the design that was tested and HELD: mission-first (falsifiable math + ~$8 + “audit the math”); the integrity stack (cap-as-feature, 50% give-away, won’t-buy-back, verifiable auction); “see the model” → SD1 (delivers the ~19-yr median / 1-in-40-yr figures), not the thin
crisis/science; framework named “in active drafting”. Keep all of it.source/buy-in/index.rst— every figure must trace here; no invented numbers.SD1 — the link the “see the model” anchor should resolve to.
3. What to change / add (a short, surgical list)#
Add the second auction. Weave in that a first auction closes June 1, 2026, and a second (~6 more units) follows ~2 weeks later (~mid-June) — and that the GoFundMe’s realistic job is to help settle that one in time (it cannot clear funds fast enough for June 1; that is the direct-ask blog’s role — prompt #1). Keep it honest and calm.
Apply the give-away criterion. Replace any vague “worthy causes” with the principle: half goes to causes in urgent need now — not endowment-building / the already-secure. Keep the investigative-journalists example (already on the Buy-In page). Do not name the Vatican or any specific org as the target (§5 caution).
Resolve the goal amount. b29 left it as an LLoL placeholder. Carry a clearly-marked
[goal --- LLoL to set]with the b29 guidance (a credible bootstrap, e.g. ~$80K, raisable in stages → $800K → $8M; not $8B in the goal field).Wire the 7 links the draft references (
[link: …]anchors): the model → SD1; balospe.com → home; the live auction → the auction post; “Two Sons, Two Altars” → the Eid post; buy-in → the Buy-In page; the plan →/action/jobs/153-fishfus-job-positions(confirm this path exists; if not, flag it); the scaling math → the Buy-In page. Gate: do not insert the Eid/auction links unless those posts are published (else dead links).Add a one-line bridge to the direct-ask blog (prompt #1’s post), for the reader who can give a lot and wants the fastest route / the All-Stadia cap.
4. What NOT to touch#
The locked title — “Join Me to Cut Our Odds of Accidental Nuclear Winter” — and the first story paragraph (“My name is Laurence Loewe…”). LLoL marked these highly refined: change only if something is genuinely broken, and if so, explain why and show before/after.
5. Cautions (do not breach)#
Give-away: criterion, not named recipient (no Vatican; no specific org as the target).
No overclaim. Matheo / RiskyMAD are in active drafting; “see the model” → SD1, never the thin
crisis/science; no “the full proof exists”.Cap-as-feature, in plain donor language (“this is why no billionaire can buy this campaign”).
Funds-timing honesty: GoFundMe cannot stop June 1 — point deadline- critical givers to the direct-ask route (the #1 blog /
LLoL@balospe.com).Keep POAATAD / “negotiate with nuclear powers” / eschatology off the GoFundMe face (behind links only) — the b29 discipline.
6. Adversarial pre-check (before finalising)#
Run the polished draft past the five b29 personas (secular/scientist truth-seeker — don’t lose the atheists; faith reader; skeptic/”scam?”; hostile journalist; 30-second mobile browser). Report HELD / changed, classify the EDEN SET type, and give a READY / READY-AFTER-FIX verdict (blockers = LLoL decisions, not prose defects).