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b32 prompt #2 --- GoFundMe story: final polish of LLoL's refined draft
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| **Mode:** EDEN. **Effort:** Max. **Run in a fresh session** (clean context).
| **Priority:** Launch-critical --- run **after** prompt #1. (GoFundMe is the
  home for the *ongoing* work and the ~mid-June **second** auction, not the
  June-1 rescue --- that is prompt #1's job.)
| **Drafter:** ``dv_ClaOp47Max``, 2026m05d28_13h54. Self-contained.


1. The task
===========

LLoL already has a **highly refined** GoFundMe story draft. The job is **final
polish to near-zero-edit quality**, not a rebuild. Deliver a clean,
copy-paste-ready GoFundMe page (title + story body + cover-line + goal note),
in an execution llog at the next free infra number.

**The canonical starting draft is recorded in the b32 llog**
(:ref:`hell-ll-infra-b32-llog`, §"LLoL's latest GoFundMe draft"). Treat it as
the base.


2. Read first (inputs)
======================

- The **b32 llog** (this session) --- the latest draft + the give-away decision
  (criterion, not named recipient) + the auction-2 instruction below.
- :doc:`b29 --- GoFundMe page executed </matheology/hell/ll/infra/b/29/b29-gofundme-page-draft-execution_2026m05d27_16h23>`
  --- the design that was tested and HELD: **mission-first** (falsifiable math +
  ~$8 + "audit the math"); the **integrity stack** (cap-as-feature, 50%
  give-away, won't-buy-back, verifiable auction); "see the model" → **SD1**
  (delivers the ~19-yr median / 1-in-40-yr figures), **not** the thin
  ``crisis/science``; framework named "**in active drafting**". Keep all of it.
- ``source/buy-in/index.rst`` --- every figure must trace here; no invented numbers.
- :doc:`SD1 </good-news-pack/vv/mmv3/supporting-doc/sd1/index>` --- the link the
  "see the model" anchor should resolve to.


3. What to change / add (a short, surgical list)
================================================

#. **Add the second auction.** Weave in that a **first** auction closes
   **June 1, 2026**, and a **second** (~6 more units) follows **~2 weeks
   later** (~mid-June) --- and that the GoFundMe's realistic job is to help
   settle **that** one in time (it cannot clear funds fast enough for June 1;
   that is the direct-ask blog's role --- prompt #1). Keep it honest and calm.
#. **Apply the give-away criterion.** Replace any vague "worthy causes" with the
   **principle**: half goes to causes in **urgent need now** --- not
   endowment-building / the already-secure. Keep the investigative-journalists
   example (already on the Buy-In page). Do **not** name the Vatican or any
   specific org as the target (§5 caution).
#. **Resolve the goal amount.** b29 left it as an LLoL placeholder. Carry a
   clearly-marked ``[goal --- LLoL to set]`` with the b29 guidance (a credible
   bootstrap, e.g. ~$80K, raisable in stages → $800K → $8M; **not** $8B in the
   goal field).
#. **Wire the 7 links** the draft references (``[link: …]`` anchors): the model
   → SD1; balospe.com → home; the live auction → the auction post; "Two Sons,
   Two Altars" → the Eid post; buy-in → the Buy-In page; the plan →
   ``/action/jobs/153-fishfus-job-positions`` (confirm this path exists; if not,
   flag it); the scaling math → the Buy-In page. **Gate:** do not insert the
   Eid/auction links unless those posts are published (else dead links).
#. **Add a one-line bridge to the direct-ask blog** (prompt #1's post), for the
   reader who can give a lot and wants the fastest route / the All-Stadia cap.


4. What NOT to touch
====================

- The **locked title** --- *"Join Me to Cut Our Odds of Accidental Nuclear
  Winter"* --- and the **first story paragraph** ("My name is Laurence
  Loewe…"). LLoL marked these highly refined: change only if something is
  genuinely broken, and if so, **explain why** and show before/after.


5. Cautions (do not breach)
===========================

- **Give-away: criterion, not named recipient** (no Vatican; no specific org as
  *the* target).
- **No overclaim.** Matheo / RiskyMAD are in active drafting; "see the model" →
  SD1, never the thin ``crisis/science``; no "the full proof exists".
- **Cap-as-feature**, in plain donor language ("this is why no billionaire can
  buy this campaign").
- **Funds-timing honesty:** GoFundMe cannot stop June 1 --- point deadline-
  critical givers to the direct-ask route (the #1 blog / ``LLoL@balospe.com``).
- Keep POAATAD / "negotiate with nuclear powers" / eschatology **off** the
  GoFundMe face (behind links only) --- the b29 discipline.


6. Adversarial pre-check (before finalising)
============================================

Run the polished draft past the five b29 personas (secular/scientist
truth-seeker --- don't lose the atheists; faith reader; skeptic/"scam?"; hostile
journalist; 30-second mobile browser). Report HELD / changed, classify the EDEN
SET type, and give a **READY / READY-AFTER-FIX** verdict (blockers = LLoL
decisions, not prose defects).


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